You left me shivering out in the cold
Was that not enough?
You gave me fever when you kissed me
But you shut me out of your world
Was that not enough?
So many words left unspoken
Why does it hurt so much?
Sadness embraced us taking us down
Was that not enough?
You are gone, left me broken
Was that not enough?
Searching for my heart I am tired I wish to give up
Now, now that is enough!
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LOTS of emotion here! Sometimes poetry is us….our real feelings. Other times we put on an imaginary hat and write about what an imaginary person must be feeling in a too real situation. My hope is that if this is you, you’re really living the last line too….”now, now, that is enough!” and feeling very good about yourself — as you are obviously one talented person! 🙂
Today is a bright sunshiney smiling day!
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Do you know what? That is the nicest thing someone said to me here on WordPress.
You are right, the poem is about my past. Right now a very pride woman who is eating popcorn is very toched by your words!
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Mmmmm….popcorn is my favorite treat! Glad to make you happy 😊
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“You gave me fever when you kiss me” gave me some memorial goosebumps, hahaha and bravo for moving on in the end.
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Wonderfully written-bravo!
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Thank you!
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Great writing. I’ve nominated you for the One Lovely Blog award: https://peace4me521.wordpress.com/2015/10/15/one-lovely-blog-award-2/
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You make something so serious slightly humourous (get out you sadist in me). This is well written and the epistrophe makes it sound like the ultimatum it is!
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Thank you!
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You took a moment that changed something for you and decided to share it, that shows strength. More than most people have. And you shared it in a very eloquent way that communicated how you felt and feel, that’s amazing.
Glad it left you stronger. Well done!!!
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